Tuesday, October 31, 2006
Description-Final
A Wonderful Girl Tracy
In the
In addition, she loves to study very much. Her hobbies are playing basketball, reading books, drawing cartoons, watching cartoons, seeing movies, and going shopping in her leisure time. Moreover, she enjoys languages, especially English and Japanese. Yet, she hates someone who likes smoking and drinking alcohol because she thinks that the smell of smoking and alcohol is smelly. In her future, she wants to become a cartoonist and be an outstanding young lady. Also, she is eager to help these who need help.
I think that
I have never had a conversation with someone who I don't know. Therefore, I deeply appreciate
Tuesday, October 24, 2006
Description-Draft 1
A Wonderful Girl Tracy
In the
In addition, she loves to study very much. Her hobbies are playing basketball, reading books, drawing cartoons, watching cartoons, seeing movies, and going shopping in her leisure time. Moreover, she enjoys languages, especially English and Japanese. Yet, she hates someone who likes smoking and drinking alcohol because she thinks that the smell of smoking and alcohol is smelly. In her future, she wants to become a cartoonist and be an outstanding young lady. Also, she helps to give service to someone who needs help.
I think that
I have never had a conversation with someone who I don't know. Therefore, I deeply thanks for
Monday, October 23, 2006
Combine sentences
2. Disney World, an amusement park, covers a large area of land, which is located in Orlando Florida and includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a wildlife preserve.
3. Jamaica, the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite, which is an ore from which Aluminum is made.
4. Robert Ballard, an oceanographer, made headings in 1985 when he discovered the remains of the Titanic, which was the "unsinkable" passenger ship and has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912 when the Titanic struck an iceberg in 1912.
5.Willian Shakespeare's father, John Shakespeare, was a glove maker and a town official who owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon, which is a town and is about 75 miles northwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen, located at the southern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, is an ancient land, which has been host to many prosperous civilizations, which include the kingdom of Sheba, and various Islamic empires.
Sunday, October 22, 2006
Description-outline
Who? Tracy Where? a park When? this semester
II. Body
grew up in Hsinchu County, 20 years old, studies in Taichung Institute of Technology, majors in Applied of foreign language and lives in a tenement alone
there are four members in her family, including her parents, her younger brother, and her.
loves to study and play basketball
enjoys languages, especially English and Japanese
wants to become a cartoonist and be a outstanding young lady in the future
she hopes to give service to someone who has to be helped.
Writer's personal reactions
Tracy is a girl who is very hardworking and surefooted.
I am glad a person such as Tracy is planning to become a cartoonist. She would make a great cartoonist.
We have a lot in common: love to see movies, go shopping and like languages
We may get together to see a movies in our free time.
III. Conclusion
Thanks for Tracy. I learned a lot of things. I enjoyed our time together.