Sunday, October 22, 2006
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I. Main Idea
Who? Tracy Where? a park When? this semester
II. Body
grew up in Hsinchu County, 20 years old, studies in Taichung Institute of Technology, majors in Applied of foreign language and lives in a tenement alone
there are four members in her family, including her parents, her younger brother, and her.
loves to study and play basketball
enjoys languages, especially English and Japanese
wants to become a cartoonist and be a outstanding young lady in the future
she hopes to give service to someone who has to be helped.
Writer's personal reactions
Tracy is a girl who is very hardworking and surefooted.
I am glad a person such as Tracy is planning to become a cartoonist. She would make a great cartoonist.
We have a lot in common: love to see movies, go shopping and like languages
We may get together to see a movies in our free time.
III. Conclusion
Thanks for Tracy. I learned a lot of things. I enjoyed our time together.
Who? Tracy Where? a park When? this semester
II. Body
grew up in Hsinchu County, 20 years old, studies in Taichung Institute of Technology, majors in Applied of foreign language and lives in a tenement alone
there are four members in her family, including her parents, her younger brother, and her.
loves to study and play basketball
hates someone who like smoking and drinking alcohol
her hobbies are reading books, drawing cartoons, watching cartoons, seeing movies, and going shopping.enjoys languages, especially English and Japanese
wants to become a cartoonist and be a outstanding young lady in the future
she hopes to give service to someone who has to be helped.
Writer's personal reactions
Tracy is a girl who is very hardworking and surefooted.
I am glad a person such as Tracy is planning to become a cartoonist. She would make a great cartoonist.
We have a lot in common: love to see movies, go shopping and like languages
We may get together to see a movies in our free time.
III. Conclusion
Thanks for Tracy. I learned a lot of things. I enjoyed our time together.
# posted by 小花 @ 4:14 PM 
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....and Japanese
wants to become a cartoonist and be "a" outstanding....
I think "a" should change to "an"
wants to become a cartoonist and be "a" outstanding....
I think "a" should change to "an"
excellent~ I think your friend is a hot girl, right? you shoud describe what does she look like, and there are some grammar mistakes that you should revise~
"hates someone who like smoking and drinking alcohol..." it should add an s after "like".
hate someone who "likes" smoking...
"Tracy is a girl who is very hardworking and surefooted." I think that "Tracy is a hardworkig and surefooted." will be better.
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hate someone who "likes" smoking...
"Tracy is a girl who is very hardworking and surefooted." I think that "Tracy is a hardworkig and surefooted." will be better.
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